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Scorpion

March 23rd, 2011

Here’s my first finished orginal, Scorpion. This is as finished as it’s ever going to be, so hope you guys like. Free download up for it too. Would love some comments and critique.

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10 Responses to “Scorpion”

  1. Jenna

    It’s good, there’s one thing I’d like to see though.

    You know after the drop, the segments of sound you have? Each one is the same pitch as the one before it… Perhaps throw in some higher pitched ones every other three…

    (1) = Original segment

    (2) = Higher pitched one.

    Example:
    0:00 – 0:24 – Intro
    0:24 – 0:25ish – Pause
    0:25ish – 0:27ish – “Get Over Here”
    0:27ish – Drop/First segment (1)
    0:29ish – second segment (1)

    Now on every third, try a high pitched one, now I noticed you linked your second and third segments at 0:32ish, still see if you like that third one at a higher pitch, even if it’s linked with the second still.

    Other then that, it’s quite good. What did you use? Ableton?

  2. Jenna

    Or can I just attempt a remix to show you what I mean? :3

  3. Zayler

    Haha, thanks for all the comments Jenna!

    Very helpful 🙂

    Yeah I use Ableton, but I’m going to leave this as it is, cause it’s my first and I’m over it. Have so many ideas for a new one.

  4. Jenna

    Ah fair enough, can I play around with it in Reason? Just for fun, then see if you like it? 😛

  5. hector doepos

    nice zayls. dubstep isnt really my thing but to me it feels like its lacking bass. needs greater lower frequencies to give it that heavier, overwhelming feel. but who knows maybe its my speakers

  6. Zayler

    Thanks dewd. Out of my speakers it sounds bad too, but through my DJ headphones it sounds very bassy. So yeah I think you just need good speakers, haha.

    Something I need to work on 🙂

  7. Ben Dawson

    Filthy as F!
    could do with a tad more melody, i know it’s grimey but i think with a little more thought into the melody and it’d be perfect!
    can’t wait for more :>

  8. guy

    This sounds really good but it just needs more cowbell

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